Help your readers  visualize your special place - to put themselves into the text and feel as though they are right there.  

Use your senses and other writing techniques to describe this special place.  

I look forward to reading your posts!
Sahel
1/28/2013

I see the lionsgate bridge from my house My house has a fantastic view. In the night time the lionsgate bridge glows and everything is shining beautifuly.I can't stop looking in the wonderful place we live in. Buildings and houses are glowing I love it.

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Carolyn Yu
1/29/2013

Good job, Sahel!!

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Sahel
1/29/2013

Thanks CAROLYN it means a lot!!!!!

SAHELETEMADAHARITHEAWESOMEGIRL
1/29/2013

Wow There is a nice view from my house.




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